Tuesday, January 25, 2011

The Fall of Snow By Matthew Dunn

The fall of snow,
is a beautiful sight.

When i wake up and hear the call from school,
it's the best and most relieving feeling.

Although the snow is very cold and freezing,
the lack of school makes up for it.

It creates such a pretty scenery,
when it falls on the trees.

1 comment:

James Horner said...

do not say it is beautiful -use words that describe its beauty-shape, texture, patterns